Caitlin's Swimming poem

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WALT: Show not Tell

WALT:  Use Adjectives

Swimming

I feel the freezing coldness touch the tips of my fingers

I kick as I am under water

I come up out of the water

I hear the crowd screaming at me

As I start my stroke                 

I feel a rush of excitement rushing through my body

I touch the wall I look around.

I had a feeling that I won the race.

They call out the winners

I hear my name called I listen

I won I actually won the race.

I walk up to the podem I stand at the top

I feel the heaviness  on my neck

It feels great I won

Whoooooooo.