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The moon was shining down on the shivaring on the water  gust up above on the grand ther was train trackes ther was a old steam train it puffed along the old trackes ther was hepes of mushroom house

Malachi

The old muddy train passes around the cloak turns 12.00 then they whet around the edgy. If you go around that edgy at night time you can hit a kid,dog,deer etc and when you hit to kid,dog,deer you can fall off the cliff and fall in to cold water. As the train goes past the small hut where to kids are playing. The two kids hear a sealion that has bad cuts so the two kids go help the sealion then the old man stopped the train and help as well. The old man had a big tank on the back of the train so they put the sealion in the tank to help the sealion cuts. Then the old man gave the kids loll pops and he whet off.

Zane

There are funky cool mushrooms with  lights that glow in the dark.A Rickie raked bridge that goes though a tulle that goes to the other side sits on the edge of the cliff  if your driving a rust y old train over the beautiful shimmering sweet water your heart races but the train chugged slowly over the glamorous.there were house shaped like mushrooms then there was a couple of  half circles house.Rock climbing on the big rocks(in the daytime its lots of fun)

Samantha

The old grey train chugged near the huge sharp cliff. The old lady had her scurf around  her neck it was so cold. She got in her grey train and realized she was going over a bridge it was so long.The bridge started to shake the earth the rocks started to fall into the water where the moon shun on the rocks.The rocks made big splashes in the water .It splashedwater onto the house’s where the people were asleep.The people started to wakeup when the water splashed on there bedroom windows.The train went acroos the bridge and went so slow it tacks hours to get off it. When she got off the earth was shaking the train track was moving and the train went off the tracks.The lady went swimming when the train crashed… ps the train has sank in the water now and it has gone ka…boom BOOM.

Tahlia

The  spanking water  shins of  the moon at milled   of the night. Chimles pouf out smock from the old black coal. the train cached its

Saxon

The kcilikty clack of people walking all over the train as  the trains going over the  train tracks and chugering slowly over the cliff on a saterdays  sun rise .The gogily eyed dogs pounce in to the water then sprint after rabbits and chce ther bold tails arund and around the tall rocks shaped like mushrooms with blue door nobs on every rock . in side a little pink  preshis little person eating a big golden brain with vampire teeth  the little monsters only come out at night luckly we are about to go over the blunt cliff   but the tarin terns way at the last minunt it was like a windy, wherly rollercoaster  but something was tiking away it was the night time bomb in 5 minunts the night bomb will trun the day time to night time then those little pink  brain eating monsters come out and start eating your  brain   . you here  the sound of scherming the monsters are in the train

Sophia

The moon shining off the roofs from the circle shaped houses the water is rough and all I can hear is the water crashing against the sharp rocks. The owl’s hooting,the chimney going and the lights flickering ‘ding dong’ as I hear the clock strike 12. ‘time to go to bed’ I hear a mother say to her son ‘but I have not finished my game yet’ he replies. As everybody is asleep ‘chug chug chug choo choo’ I hear the train go past ‘aw,shhhhhh we are trying to sleep!’ a angry person trying to sleep howls out.

Joseph

One freezing cold night there was a big old train that went across the moon in to a paddock. Then the train went around the coner and had to cross a bridge. The old train chugged arocss the bridge. The old bridge  broke the guy jumped out the train. The old train sadly dide the village and the old man was sad as well.

Brayden

The young girl Kate and her green companion Bob had too cross the rickety old bridge on the new shiny blue train because she needed too get the smallest mushroom house and save her tiny black kitten.The girls companion was afraid of all the fish with sharp pointy  teeth in the water and then started float up in the air suddenly BANG he banged his head on the grey roof  and fell to the soft red floor “oh my gosh”said the girl “It is all ready night time how will we find the kitten now”What happened” said Bob and got up off the floor and the maid Ella came in “Here we are”

Nina

The young lady peered through the dirty window of the big ,bright bus as it was driving through the enormous rocks. As the young lady was crossing the long, narrow bridge she looked down at the shimmering water and saw…  a BIG SHARK  !!!!!!!!!!! The shark was opening and closing its large mouth with its gigantic,sharp teeth showing trying to eat  her just as the she was crossing the bridge. Then it was starting to get a little dark and the moon was reflecting into the blue,shiny water as it was swaying side to side because of the strong winds. The wind was getting so strong it turned into a ferocious tornado but the it was morning again and it had cleared up.

Preethi

The gnarled old man stared out of his jagged old cabin into the sparkly reflection of the sun in the lake. He was shaking all over as he drove his train over the sharp edge of the cliff, he could see the reflection of the ragged old train coming around the sharp edge of the old cliff. He was shaking all over his teeth were chattering with fear and his heart pumping as fast as his train used to be back in the days. The train moved   across the worn old bridge the ride was a delight!

Catherine

As I walked along the disgraceful streets of Myst the sound of rushing water ran through my fragile ears.Big black bridges creaked while the shiny burgundy train chugged around the edge of Myst. The werewolves began to howl on the mountains that surrounded me, it felt like I was in some sort of prison.

Ella RW

The old rugged train chagged along the narrow steap  cliff .The old gnarled lady look out the old dusty window  when she  saw a brige an old rikdy  brige .Her heart were raceing like she was raceing a race horse.

Libby

It was a hot day in summer city.The sun was shining so bright that you could see the bottom of the lake without getting up close.As the creaky old steam train turned around the windy train track the driver suddenly felt like a swim instead of being covered in steam with a nasty cough. The hot rocks and amazing tree huts with diving boards to jumping off! If you stood on the top of the highest rock you could see the empty cold and very gloomy sea! The tree hut at the top of the highest rock was used for their latest invention the starscope at night you could look through them and make patterns it the stars, there are also portable toilets for you to use!

Ella F

 In the middle of no where the train on the old track was going as slow as a sloth so that the track will not brake. There in the distens was a shard edge that was braking off and if the trian went over it the bridge it would brake and the trian will fall into the canon below the bridge. The trian driver steped on the excorst and went so fast the bridge did not brake. There were rocks that looked like mushrooms that looked a bit damadge. The mushroom rocks were looking like it will fall on the old bridge. The trian went past the tree houses. The houses lights went on as the trian went by. The fill moon was shinning on the water like a dimond in the water.

Byron

The big blue waves silently crashed against the sandy shore line. The full moon’s reflection is so bright it makes you fell lonely and sad it gassed upon all of the little cozy hoses they looked cold and empty, gloomy in fact. Its like its been this way for so long like a hundred years or so. The lights are on but no one is home. Every step you take it feels like someone is watching you. Its dark the air is cold but all is quiet. The clouds reassemble a very dark and cold memories. That practicably runs right through this places veins.  Its like you are connected here its like you belong here. Hands are shaking no birds cheeping.Waves still crashing on the shore line Full moon still shining  BUT all stayed silent for now…

Sophie

In the middle of know where there was a old rusty train that goes around nasty, steep corners. The mushrooms were like twenty feet tall but in the night the water was spashing with catfish. A fourty one year old man drove the old rusty train that had started to come to bits. In the middle of the tiny village there was a tempale crowdd with trees all the time children would come and climb on the them but know they don’t because they herd a wolf. In the night the village is full of lights it looks awesome. The bridge is crumbley with all the damadge from the tornato what a sham it never got fixed up. The old man still drives over it even though it broken. The mushrooms at night light up like lightposts.

Zoe