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Sophie's Commonwealth Games Poem

Fencing

As I grip my Sword and Start to sweat

The referee shouts out fence,

I thrust My blade at my opponent's Chest

He obviously think that hes the best,

I feel my pulse Beating Hard

I can’t believe I've Come this Far,

I'm At the Commonwealth Games

My Family are all so amazed,

My opponent thrusts at me

I block his hits all with ease,

With one last hit I knock him down

The Celebration echoes all around,

I've Won it I've done it  

I hear the Cheers,

After all that training

After all those years,

Its finished its done

I've been crowned number one

And I shall cherish this memory for years to come

For the Art of fencing is my number one.

By Sophie

Caitlin's Swimming poem

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WALT: Show not Tell

WALT:  Use Adjectives

Swimming

I feel the freezing coldness touch the tips of my fingers

I kick as I am under water

I come up out of the water

I hear the crowd screaming at me

As I start my stroke                 

I feel a rush of excitement rushing through my body

I touch the wall I look around.

I had a feeling that I won the race.

They call out the winners

I hear my name called I listen

I won I actually won the race.

I walk up to the podem I stand at the top

I feel the heaviness  on my neck

It feels great I won

Whoooooooo.