Sophie's Commonwealth Games Poem

Fencing

As I grip my Sword and Start to sweat

The referee shouts out fence,

I thrust My blade at my opponent's Chest

He obviously think that hes the best,

I feel my pulse Beating Hard

I can’t believe I've Come this Far,

I'm At the Commonwealth Games

My Family are all so amazed,

My opponent thrusts at me

I block his hits all with ease,

With one last hit I knock him down

The Celebration echoes all around,

I've Won it I've done it  

I hear the Cheers,

After all that training

After all those years,

Its finished its done

I've been crowned number one

And I shall cherish this memory for years to come

For the Art of fencing is my number one.

By Sophie

Caitlin's Swimming poem

Caitlin's Crazy Blog: CLICK HERE:

WALT: Show not Tell

WALT:  Use Adjectives

Swimming

I feel the freezing coldness touch the tips of my fingers

I kick as I am under water

I come up out of the water

I hear the crowd screaming at me

As I start my stroke                 

I feel a rush of excitement rushing through my body

I touch the wall I look around.

I had a feeling that I won the race.

They call out the winners

I hear my name called I listen

I won I actually won the race.

I walk up to the podem I stand at the top

I feel the heaviness  on my neck

It feels great I won

Whoooooooo.

Shantytown videos

By Zoe, Ella RW, Nina and Samantha



By Bronah, Caitlin, Sophie and Te Ora

Tweet of the Week - ANZAC

Well done Sophie!!

Click here for the video showing all the 'Tweets of the Week'.

Sophie's google presentation NUMERACY

Magical Footpath Chalk

Blogspot blogs - From Room 11 Blogs (to the right) 

Nina's Chalk Challenge

Ella's Elegant Writing

Ella F's Fab Chalk Challenge

Sophie's Chalk Writing

Byron's Challenge

Kidblogs - Copied here for those of you who can't access our kidblogs

Zane's Challenge Writing

If you had magic footpath chalk what will you make with it?

Here are same things that i will draw.

1.A big chocolate bar:To eat all day long and it will be diary milk.

2.A big pool:For people who what to swim and to learn.

3.A tv: So i can play my xbox.

4.A lot of xbox 360 games:For me to play with my xbox 360.

5.Money for me and my family and chard:So i can help the poor how has no family and meed help

Sophia's Wonderful Writing

My rules for the Magical Footpath Chalk are.

its only for emoginces.

don’t use more than your thumb.

never use it in the rain .

if being used don’t say the foaling bed time bed time i want a …

if you do the Chalk will become evil destroyer chalk.

Riley's Chalk Writing

If i had magical footpath chalk i would draw.

1. Moter bike:A small moter bike.

2Money for my family:100 million.

3.A shop:So i can make my own food

4.A tv in my room:Flat screen.

5.A xbox for my self:So i can play the xbox by my self.

6.Xbox games:To play

Sammy's Sensational Writing

If I had the chalk I would draw…

*A candy water park!

*A pencil that makes the most coolest things ever!

*The most biggest burger ever!

*16 walking smurfs!

*A trampoline made out of the best jelly ever!

*A candy land!

Zoe's Zany Writing

If I had Magical Footpath Chalk I would make:

A best Friend with long hair that is blue,
A talking and walking chocolate bar,
And a candy land
A hydro slide with candy water {Most of the water would be made of licorices}
A trampoline made out of jelly.

Sophie's Family Tree - Home Learning Activity

First example of family tree activity from Room 11! Well done Sophie! 

What a great example to share with us.

How is your independent learning going? 

Have you completed an activity? 

Camp 2013

This week Room 11 were lucky enough to head up the coast for our school camp.

 Our highlights were:

*Swimming at the Nile River and the new aquatic centre - Ella R-W

*Charming Creek walkway - Byron

*Visiting the Seal Colony - Joseph

*Visiting the township and mine at the Denniston Incline - Miss P

*Travelling on the unimogs to Stockton Mine - Sophie

*Mitchell's Gully Goldmine - Tahlia

*Sand sculptures at Carters Beach - Sam