Tuhi Main Tuhi Atu Term 3

Here we go again! Woo hoo! 

Term 3 and we have a new buddy to add to our group of 3. We look forward to blogging with you and getting to know you. 

Here is our (unfinished) slide where we are introducing ourselves. 

Random Tuesday Descriptive Writing

Imagine you find this spot. 

Describe it using all the techniques that you have learnt to make your writing fantastic!

Use your senses.

Check out our descriptive writing!

Videos to follow so pop back to check them out next week.

Baby Gorilla Description

Random Friday (Tuesday) writing

Write the Myth that caused your family home to be destroyed!

• Have a fabulous opener
• Use pronouns like (I Me We Our)

Check out our amazing QUATRAIN poems!

Winter wonderland Pufferfish and Angelfish!

Thanks for the idea Miss Leigh!!

Here are our descriptive words, similes and metaphors!

The world would be a better place if everyone was like me:

1. If everyone put the lid on the toothpaste.
2. If everyone put the tv remotes back on the table.
3. If everyone covered up the cheese in the fridge.

Show not tell 'Room 11' collaboration

Check out our LIP writing.

NEW BLOG ALERT!

Leave us a comment but make it a goodie. We want to know what you like and how we can improve. Please don't use the words:

• good
• ok

OR

• I like it

Please tell us what you like and WHY you like it.

Also look at our WALT's and give us feedback on them.

Thanks Miss Panther and the LIP boys

Miss Panther has a black eye!

This is what we think happened...

Byron

Riley

Sophie

Zoe

Angus

Jimmy

Caitlin

Holly

Josh

Finlay

Alex

Maya

Sammy

Brayden

Max

Malachi

Ella RW

Kate

Dillon

Bronah

Nina

Callan

How do you think it happened?

I'm late!

In NZ we are going into ‘NZ Winter Time’. Brrrr!

This means that we will put our clocks back which means that we ‘gain’ an hour of sleeping time! 

Our random writing this week is:

…but I thought I had enough time…

Click here for some examples!

Click on our names below for our 100 word challenges!

Josh

Alex K

Byron

Angus

Callan

Bronah

Holly

Jimmy

Brayden

Sammy

Malachi

Max

Can we help these writers?

http://y32013.estcourtprimary.net/2014/02/07/next-week-in-literacy/#comments

Why do you think dragons are extinct?

It's a Small world Challenge 2

This week we are sharing what we do in our breaks (or recess) and for fun in the weekends!

Write a post including photos and videos. Start it today and edit it over the week. 

We will then share it with our blogging buddies and find out all about them.

Remember that other children want to know what is DIFFERENT to them so think about what we do that makes us unique in NZ.

How to.... writing instructions based on our reading text!

Click here to read some of our instructions!

Proof my teacher lives at school!

Click here to read some examples of our ideas!

100 word challenge!

You can either start your story with the prompt, end with the prompt or use it in the middle.


… as the train entered the tunnel ….


Post it on kidblog then ask me to link it to the class blog so we can enter it. 

Our first lines - using Little Bird Tales

• Click to view my tale.
• 

Whisper ideas

Created with Padlet

Our Evil Descriptions - do you recognise anyone?

I peered around the corner and saw the most EVIL thing I had ever seen in my life……..It was green, slimy and it had a breath that smelt like ROTTEN EGGS. It was hairless and it had a mouth that was covered with blue lipstick and its eyes had grey eyeshadow all over its eyelids.

Preethi

I peered around the corner and i sew the most EVIL thing i had ever seen…

He had stains all over his body he smelt like a row fish thats been in the dumpster for 10 years. He had hear all over his body it looked like big foot but it looked more hear smelt all lot more. He has a pickaxe in one hand and a sword in the other hand. He does not kill he dances!!

If you could make up a evil monster what will it look like and describe it.

Can you inmagine it now?

Zane

I peered around the corner and I saw the most EVIL thing I had ever seen in my life…

SLENDER MAN the most scariest thing ever he has no FACE!!! he has tentacals on his back. He teleports all around you then when he sees you he will suck your soul!

Mitchell

I peered around the corner and saw the most EVIL thing i had ever seen in my life… He had a red nose like RED paint. He had weird matching clothes and SHARP teeth and white paint on his face and he has gloves and a red hair BIG RED SHOES

Riley

I pared around the corer and I saw the most EVIL thing I had ever seen in my life

he had a breath that smelt like rotten eggs and had finger nails about a meter long.His teeth where rotten as rotten could be.

Samantha

I peered around the corner and I saw the most EVIL thing I had ever seen in my life…

SLENDERMAN!!!!

the disgusting white face with no eyes,no mouth,no ears,no hair and no nose staring straight at ME. That black tuxedo the long arms and tentacles ripping out his back I can just feel him taking out my soul right in front of me.

Joseph