Monday, April 8, 2013

Time travel descriptive writing


Week 11 narrative challenge

If you could time travel, where would you go?
What year or era would you choose?
What would you see?
Why did you choose that time or place?



Make sure you use:

a simile (like or as)
a metaphor (is or was)
alliteration (the same letter for each word)

Use kidblog to publish your work.


5 comments:

  1. Your writing is awesome Room 11. I will choose the best of the best tonight and transfer them here!

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  2. Wow room 11,
    you guys are SO creative. Keep up the awesome work! :)

    Sincerely,
    Janiece


    P.S-come visit my blog at
    http://kidblog.org/MrsVilas/author/ae45c3f5-548f-49e0-ac5c-a0b5d28dbd86/

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  3. Dear Room 11,
    you guys are very creative. Keep up your good work! :)

    from,
    Janiece


    P.S-come visit my blog at
    http://kidblog.org/MrsVilas/author/ae45c3f5-548f-49e0-ac5c-a0b5d28dbd86/

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  4. Dear Room 11,
    Your writing is amazing all of you! You made a short piece and made it amazing! Nice work keep blogging!

    Sincerely,
    Cayla P.S. Go to my blog! kidblog.org/MrsVilas/author/7051f9dd-4777-4627-b081-5be7f5c2c87a/

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  5. Dear Room 11,
    Your writing is amazing all of you! You made a short piece and made it amazing! Nice work keep blogging!

    Sincerely,
    Cayla P.S. Go to my blog! kidblog.org/MrsVilas/author/7051f9dd-4777-4627-b081-5be7f5c2c87a/

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