Tuesday, March 12, 2013

Abby's 100 word challenge #23

http://100wc.net/

 One dark stormy night there was a mysterious cat that was having a bath next to the castle. Then it walked into an orange house and looked in the window of the house. I saw lots and lots of RATS! The cat separated them into 10 groups for the best group to eat. I run as fast as I could and told my family and they said I was crazy. I said "I am not!" They told everybody else and they told them it was true then they told them the story of the MYSTERIOUS CAT and how it all began.

By Abby 
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6 comments:

  1. AnonymousMarch 13, 2013 at 3:50 AM

    I like your story, but there was no commas in some place's. But I think you have a good imagination about the mysterious cat, and the part were the cat separated the rats into groups of ten.

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  2. Jill PearsMarch 13, 2013 at 6:01 AM

    I love your 100 word challenges - so creative! :-)

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  3. AnonymousMarch 13, 2013 at 9:17 AM

    Very funny and I love your post! It makes me giggle!!!

    Sam Rm11

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  4. AnonymousMarch 13, 2013 at 9:22 AM

    I love your story it was scary.
    From Tahlia.

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  5. AnonymousMarch 13, 2013 at 9:24 AM

    Hi Abby
    I love your 100 word challenge
    Nina

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  6. AnonymousApril 27, 2013 at 3:44 AM

    Hi ,abby I'm alex and I'm your blogging body. I think your 100 word challenge was great when you added a lot of details. I also think you are an amazing writer. I have one suggestion, if you would like to add pictures go to pics 4 kids and you can find a picture.

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