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Wow only one day till Easter! Yay! I hope for Easter I get ORANGE eggs because orange is my favourite colour but so is blue so I hope they separate the blue eggs from the orange eggs.
Hey I guess that’s a bit mysterious because you never know do you?
Hey where’s Perry? Oh I forgot to tell you Perry is my cat. Hmm he will show up sometime.
Daniel! It’s bath time. Oh come on! Not again! I HATE bath time! It is the worst but anyway let’s get it over with…
Ok out Daniel! Tea time Yay! Yum.
That is so cool Darian.
ReplyDeleteWhy does Daniel hate bath time.
From Byron
Hi Darian, I enjoyed your 100WC. I particularly liked the range of punctuation that you have included, it gives feeling to your writing. I also like the chatty style that you have used, I imagine a child's train of thought is very much like that. Have you thought about including commas in your writing, just to let your readers know where to pause? Well done and I look forward to seeing more of your writing. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Mrs Tucker.
DeleteI will try to use a couple commas next time. I am looking forward to hear from you!
May I ask what the prizes are?
This is a awesome 100 word challange! :)
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